Saien ji yeh sub uss parwerdigar k raz hain.in razon main dakhal dai ker kahin ussay Naraz Ker baitho gay....................................thalay aa Allah ki shan Main gustakhi ha woh to har jagah her kahin hay Phir Thallay aa ki Kia Tuk Banti ha is main tabdeeli zaroor Kerain...................
Saen Lahori se guzarish hay ke Allah se Shikwa to kar lyaa, abb Insan ke gunahon ka zikr bhi karay... jin ka bawajood Allah iss qadr Naamatein atta kyai huwa hay... Jawab e Shikwa?
Aaawwlaa nzm hai... Kuch ooper comments parhy hain jo k isko gustakhi keh rahay hain.. Mgr shayd unko ye baat samjh nhi aa rahi.. K ye logon ko bawar karaya jaa raha hai k Allah ka khaof khao,, usky samny pesh hona hai... Allah pe koi etraz nhi kr raha.. Etrazaat or manzar kashi logon ki hui hai.. Aashqi mashooqi main sanam ko khuda kaho to yehi jahil wah wah krty hain
Saien ji yeh sub uss parwerdigar k raz hain.in razon main dakhal dai ker kahin ussay Naraz Ker baitho gay....................................thalay aa Allah ki shan Main gustakhi ha woh to har jagah her kahin hay Phir Thallay aa ki Kia Tuk Banti ha is main tabdeeli zaroor Kerain...................
ReplyDeleteShair ka apna kheyal hota Allah kehta hai Mera Banda mujh se jis tra bat kry usy kon hai rokne waly siway mery
DeleteNice poetry by Saeen Akhtar Lahoree,
ReplyDeleteapnay dil ki bharass nikali huiii hay iss farsooda nazam aur lower class mushkul zindagii k halat k khilaff.
'Nicely representing the voice of lower class and ordinary folk'
Allah mian uthay re k bhe sab kam ker sakta hai :) wo sabb daikh rha hai saey gee :)
ReplyDeletejawab dia tha na phir....jab fatway lagay thy saen par....saen nay phir bola tha k Allah mian uthy he reh
DeleteWOW ! SO BEAUTIFUL ..SO TRUE ...PAR EXCELLENCE !
ReplyDeleteVery interesting poem!
ReplyDeleteWah wah saeen g
ReplyDeleteBohut khoob saien g ap ny behtreen munzar kashi ki ha .
ReplyDeleteWah g wah bohut khoob
ReplyDeleteSaien g ap ny bohut hi piyari Manzr kashi ki ha Thanks for nice Poem
ReplyDeleteبہت شکریہ، مہربانی۔ یہ نظم بہت تلاش کی، لیکن آپ کے بلاگ پر مل گئی۔
ReplyDeleteYes same here
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ReplyDeleteVery Nice
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ReplyDeleteSaen Lahori se guzarish hay ke Allah se Shikwa to kar lyaa, abb Insan ke gunahon ka zikr bhi karay... jin ka bawajood Allah iss qadr Naamatein atta kyai huwa hay... Jawab e Shikwa?
ReplyDeleteso nice
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Nice one.... Great shikwa
ReplyDeleteboht great hai.... love u
ReplyDeleteنہایت گستاخانہ نظم ہے
ReplyDeleteAaawwlaa nzm hai...
ReplyDeleteKuch ooper comments parhy hain jo k isko gustakhi keh rahay hain..
Mgr shayd unko ye baat samjh nhi aa rahi.. K ye logon ko bawar karaya jaa raha hai k Allah ka khaof khao,, usky samny pesh hona hai...
Allah pe koi etraz nhi kr raha.. Etrazaat or manzar kashi logon ki hui hai..
Aashqi mashooqi main sanam ko khuda kaho to yehi jahil wah wah krty hain
The poem is a combination if philosophy and so an ordinary mind cannot get this.
ReplyDeleteAmazing work. Also see the version that Kanwar Grewal sang recently
ReplyDeleteI love it
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